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Quite a difficult shot to take using a reversed lens held together with blu-tack whilst remaining still to get the focus correct. :D


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:iconkaeljia:
The overall photo is not complete. Without the entire eye being shown its unfinished. Otherwise, the clarity is wonderful. You have beautiful eyes. I don't mind that the lashes are not focused because the important part of the eye is in perfect focus.

Its good to not see the camera reflected back from the eye, I like the yellow glow on the right it is like an arrow directing our view around the circumference of your eye. I just wish the entire eye was in the photo is all. possibly by turning the camera on its side? I rate this an A in contrast and clarity, but a C in framing.
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It is an amazing picture! If I wold of made it I would have put make up on the eye in photoshop to make it pop. Maybe like a black eyeliner with green eyeshadow that sparkles! Other than that it is beautiful! But if you were aiming for a more natrual look you got it! I think it is beautiful. The skin looks a little pasty. I would have fixed that also on photoshop. I like the sparkly water look under the eye. Ecept it reminds m of dew. Again thought if you were aiming for natural there you go! :D
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That is unbelievable knowing that you had to manually focus this.. :wow:

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Thats kinda creepy @-@

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Great clarity. i haven't gotten one of those to turn out yet.
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Whoa. Your iris is like a ring of fire blazing over a bed of marshes.

How epic is that.

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Drop-dead stunning detail! It looks like there's a golden spiderweb over the green, or maybe latticing on a medieval rose window. Great colour too, my favourite shade of green. Love it altogether!

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very successful :clap:
eye photographers know how it is so hard...

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such beautiful eyes. It's not enough to have a steady hand with macro, I'm afraid. For Macro it is mandatory to have a tripod and an external flash but you already know that. I used Pieter's father's external flash and tripod to take photos of lady beatles and then realized this fact when I saw the results.

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the detail is unbelievable. you can see the fibers :omg: I really like it :D

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Apr 4, 2009, 12:24:29 AM

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